Princess Prettie

It's so... jolly! I like it, and I like that it rhymes even more. Excellent job :D

That was pretty much way cool. It's really disturbing, and some of it I had to read twice (it's fast-paced), but overall, really well-written. It reminds me of the movie ...

Thankies. I've always had a few issues with paragraphs and spacing, I'll fix that when I get to work on the next chapter.

Thanks for the feedback, and yeah, I did mean to make it all one line. It was pretty late when I typed this so there's probably lots of errors that ...

thanks for the feedback. so far in the plot, it is very sterotypical, but the rest of where i'm going is so, so far from there... when i was planning ...

Uhhh... I called it that because every picture is supposed to speak 1000 words...

Here's Version 2.0... I don't know if this is more rushed or less rushed, and I tried my best to make it more visible, and I based a part of ...

I'm working on a revised draft: I took away the cussing, and I added a bit where more girls come and make fun of her, and I also added a ...

OOOH! Yeah I just read Go Ask Alice for school, and it kind of inspired me to write this, but they're going to be pretty different. Thanks for the advice! ...

Cool. I'm working on my second version right now... This site is REALLY helpful!

Hey, thanks for the feedback. I am a new writer, and only fourteen, so I'm not the best at it... but the reason I used the cuss word is because... ...

Eesh not so popular piece of writing lol... but I'm kind of confused by your comments. What do you mean by narrative? And with the word 'bitches' do you mean ...

THANKS A TON! I think when I started this story I meant for Ashlie to be the blonde girl, but then changed my mind, but forgot to change the story. ...

Thanks for the feedback. And I'll totally be sure to read the rules. I know that this is really short, and it doesn't have a point, and the plot isn't ...